debian/{control,templates}: use the text reviewed by debian-l10n

Closes: #733300
Thanks: Christian PERRIER and Justin B Rye

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 6b35c5e..0658722 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -20,17 +20,18 @@ Depends: ${shlibs:Depends},
          udev,
          wget,
          p7zip-full (>= 9.20)
-Description: helpers to setup audio input from the Microsoft Kinect sensor
- When the Kinect is first plugged in the USB port it shows up as
- a generic USB device with a bulk endpoint; after uploading a certain
- firmware a reenumeration takes place and a USB Audio Class device
- becomes available.
+Description: Microsoft Kinect sensor audio setup helpers
+ When the Kinect sensor is first plugged in, its audio input device shows
+ up as a generic USB device; after the appropriate firmware is loaded, the
+ device is reset and it becomes available as a USB Audio Class (UAC)
+ device.
  .
- kinect-audio-setup provides tools to download the firmware off the net
- at installation time —since the firmware is not redistributable—, and
- it sets up udev rules to call the firmware loader when the device is
- plugged in to finally get the USB Audio Class device.
+ Since the firmware is not redistributable, kinect-audio-setup provides
+ tools to download it from the Internet at installation time, and sets up
+ udev rules to call the firmware loader when the device is plugged in to
+ finally get the UAC device.
  .
- The UAC firmware is downloaded from the Microsoft Kinect SDK at
- http://www.kinectforwindows.org, the license of the SDK can be found at
- http://www.kinectforwindows.org/download/EULA.htm
+ The UAC firmware is downloaded from the Microsoft Kinect Software
+ Development Kit at http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/kinectforwindows/, the
+ license of which can be found at
+ http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/kinectforwindows/develop/sdk-eula.aspx

diff --git a/debian/templates b/debian/templates
index d5cb6ab..a5d1c18 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/templates
+++ b/debian/templates
@@ -1,17 +1,28 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: kinect-audio-setup/accept_eula
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Do you accept the Microsoft KinectForWindows EULA?
- In order to fetch the binary firmware needed by this package you need
- to agree to the EULA of the Microsoft KinectForWindows SDK:
+#flag:translate!:3
+_Description: Do you accept the Microsoft Kinect for Windows EULA?
+ In order to fetch the binary firmware needed by the kinect-audio-setup
+ package, you need to agree to the End User License Agreement (EULA) of
+ the Microsoft Kinect for Windows Software Development Kit:
  .
- http://www.kinectforwindows.org/download/EULA.htm
+ http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/kinectforwindows/develop/sdk-eula.aspx
 
 Template: kinect-audio-setup/eula_not_accepted
-Type: note
+Type: error
 _Description: EULA not accepted
- You need to accept the EULA of Microsoft KinectForWindows SDK in order
- to fetch the binary firmware needed by this package.
+ You need to accept the End User License Agreement (EULA) of the
+ Microsoft Kinect for Windows Software Development Kit in order
+ to fetch the binary firmware needed by the kinect-audio-setup package.
  .
- You can do this later by calling:
-   dpkg-reconfigure kinect-audio-setup
+ You can do this later with "dpkg-reconfigure kinect-audio-setup".